my 4th song

#1 Milican

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Posted 19 January 2012 - 04:20 PM

i made this song

I wanna make an album and this is the 4th song...
how is it ??
give me your opinion if you don't mind

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#2 Lotus Petal

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Posted 19 January 2012 - 07:50 PM

This sounds graceful, like something that would have been in Lament of Innocence. I enjoyed this song immensely. The chord progression is great and I like hearing the staccato notes in there in Baroque style. As it is, however, it sounds like a medley of different songs. If you're intending for it to be all one song, I would work on bridging the sudden changes in melody and tempo so that it felt more cohesive. Great stuff! ^__^

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#3 The Successor

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Posted 20 January 2012 - 12:16 AM

That's really, really nice. I've admired your playing quite a bit ever since you posted videos on the Chapel a long time ago. There are a lot of good ideas in this piece. It's fine in this piano solo format, but it would be really interesting if you could get a synth and orchestrate this. A synth won't have the depth and density or complexity in overtones of a resonating wooden instrument, including electric wooden instruments, which is in part what leads synths to sound less organic, but they are still advantageous in many applications, and it'd be nice to hear what you can do with additional voices.

How long did it take you to write this song?

Keep up the good work, and I look forward to hearing more from you!

#4 Milican

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Posted 20 January 2012 - 11:52 AM

thanks xD
i need many idea from many people...
oh yeah i'll search more inspiration for the bridge.. i used to think about that too ._.

hmm orchestrate this song...
but i confused to choose the musical instruments..
i really admire Michiru Yamane .. she can mix the instruments in a song beautifully

synth is a good idea

I'll try..
this is my 4th song from 9,
and there's 3 song before this "Whisper from the Silent","Nocturnal Angel",and i didn't name the 3rd... incomplete
I'll upload them as well

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#5 Jean Reyes

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Posted 07 May 2012 - 02:23 PM

It sounds great and it is very relaxing. I think you should keep on making your own songs. I can listen to this kind of stuffs the whole day during my off days. I would definitely buy your album if you'll have one. It is nice to here that people are pursuing their passions here.

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